Think you nailed the bass and drums on this one. It's got a real nice flow to it. The synths works well with each other and sounds good albeit a bit generic. Think you got benefit from at least doubling the duration of the builds to generate even more anticipation. All in all I really like this one. Great work (:
Haha yeah indeed. Thanks!
Not my kinda music, but I sort of like it anyway:D Got some ok parts and some pretty damn tasty ones. The most apprent flaw of this song is that the drums kinda drown, so you could probably benefit from eq'ing them in somehow. You probably have to turn down the rest of the mix aswell.
Track is more or less flawless in terms of mixing. It's also a pretty damn solid song. So 2 for 2 there. Only thing I'm missing is a bit more dynamic songstructure. Almost all the different parts feels really loud. Now in most cases that's pretty much a necessity, but it think you're missing out on alot of potential suspense. Except from that I'm not crazy about that noise sound that seems to accentuate the bass at around 01:57 and so on. Anyways it's a really solid track. You should be happy with yourself on this one :D
Thanks for the review dude! And yes! You are very right haha. There is hardly any dynamic at the drop because I fuck up my mixes by boosting every sounds to it's maximum. that's the disadvantage of having headphones alone. Need more volume lol x)
Sick sound on this one! Intro was crazy good, but seems like the sub bass and bass (or what it is) creates this loud bass sound that pops out of the mix around 1:15 and similar parts. Might be intentional, but I find it a bit annoying. Gets a little repetive after a while so you might wanna throw in an occasional odd sound or synth. But as I said, really great sound on the song. You should be proud:)
thanks for the review, yeah that sound was intentional but it wasn't supposed to be that loud. Its fixed now so it should all sound better. I changed a few more things to mix it up a little, though it still has a repetitive feel but that's how i wanted it. Thanks again, i appreciate it.
This stuff has got some potential. Try extending it, incorporate some new elements and add some automated effects. Just a suggestion anyway(:
Thanks for the reviews and will be sure to try that. :P
I love the sound of this song and especially the vox. Lofi the way it should be. That being said you should really take some more time on this. I would really love this song if all that sloppy timing got out of the way.
Thanks of the review. I feel like most of the timing issues is towards the end. If you can other hear major parts let me know.
Pretty good stuff
Obviously a song driven by the beat, so the melody being a little repetive doesn't bother me. Think the shaker (if I may call it so) is a little out of place with its crisp and clear sound while the rest is drenched (more or less) in reverb. It's also a bit loud. Think the song would feel a little more organic if you did something about it. As mentioned by treyhaur you should work in a decent bassline. Doesn't have to be some crazy inventive stuff, just something basic so you'll have a little more going on in the lowfreq area. All in all a good track :)
constructive criticism is always appreciated. I'll keep your words in mind for future reference.
Pretty damn cool
Liked a lot about song, but I didn't care too much about the fifth-synth (If it's that you used) from 0:44 to 1:43. Was too dominating and didn't match the other stuff too good.
Otherwise great song, man (:
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